I like the ink line on the body, but not the face. Or, to be more precise, the treatment of the face doesn’t match the body. The body’s line-work is much simpler and spontaneous than the face; it would be better if the two parts matched. Also, the head is too small; it makes figure look super-heroic.
I like the way I smushed the end of the nearly-dry brush into the paper to get the effect of nappy negro body hair.
